Descriptive Menu Comments
Topic Sentence - The topic sentence of a descriptive paragraph needs to create an overall impression of the subject.
Impression - This passage does not leave an impression on the reader. Be more descriptive.
Unclear - It is unclear what overall impression the reader should take away from this passage.
Concrete Details - Include concrete details in your description.
Vivid - Use more vivid language here.
Specific - Use more specific language here.
Senses - Good descriptive writing takes advantage of the physical senses or sensory details (e.g., sight, sound, smell, touch, or taste) to describe the subject.